vite fait sur le gaz, non?

alala, je c'est plus quoi penser...

sais

nul

sophie après tu me dis qu'il faud que je retravail mes visu... ralala sacré toi... :-(

hey, please comment in english, so that i can understand. would be nice. I did not copy of the "BULLER!" design, I sent it in before I could even see the one of Psykopat. First my design was not accepted because of copyright, but I really did not copy, its a coincidence that we both had the idea with the paperchain the same time.

great

no worries, nobody said you've been copied Psykopat! Your idea is good but maybe too... easy. You should work maybe more on your free character, like to draw an effect of torn paper. And work more on the shadows. I hope it can help...

Thank you lorAnse for your comment. I totaly understand your criticism, maybe i focused too much on the idea. But easy does not always automaticly mean that it doesn't look good. I like it easy and I like the idea behind, that the jumping character looks like celios logo. But anyhow, thank you a lot for your explination.

It's a quite good design ! Really like it: easy to understand, with sense, well made. In this case, less is more ;) Well done !

Thank you Mortimix! - I just uploaded a second design, improved with lorAnses tipps, hopefully you get to see it -

kalablind.com> I'm sorry, maybe you misunderstood what I wanted to say by "easy". All I mean is you should work more on the composition because actually the idea is great and easy to understand. It just miss little details which help it for to be funnier. (Sorry my vocabulary is limited... :/ )

but do it quickly 'cause the compétition is ending up at 7pm (in 2 hours) ^^

lorAnse> I think I got it, i just changed the small things you mentioned. I already submitted the design...

ah ok, it'll be upload soon (it's "Friday's crazy game" right now so...) I'll wait to submit a vote then!!

I like the way people who said they don"t like it didn't manage to write it again in english .. Anyway, this one is pretty easy to understand and quite funny, so +9

lorAnse> This would have been the improved version with shadow and more detail concerning the "torn" paper. I guess they didn't manage to upload it in time: http://kalablind.com/celio2.jpg

kaladlind.com > better with shadow. good job !

I like it , clear und easy massage

yeah djfabim, I like too, easy "massage" ;)

it is so good congratulation for this picture